Sunday, May 15, 2005
free and home again
this is an old path
that I'm dancing over
if I looked down maybe I'd see your footprints
walking in that one direction
I don't know where you're going
I just know that you're going
and this is an old chord
that I'm listening to
and pulling a melody out of
just like you pulled a melody out of me when you were still here
my eyes are closed
to welcome this feeling
familiar, lost and drifting
free and home again
that I'm dancing over
if I looked down maybe I'd see your footprints
walking in that one direction
I don't know where you're going
I just know that you're going
and this is an old chord
that I'm listening to
and pulling a melody out of
just like you pulled a melody out of me when you were still here
my eyes are closed
to welcome this feeling
familiar, lost and drifting
free and home again
// posted by suze @ 10:18 PM 
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Do you think so? I hadn't intended it to be sad. But then it was one of those things that came out unintended.
Now that I am actually reading it....you're right it IS sad, but not in a bad way I think.
Why is it easier to right sad/depressing words? I find it very difficult to write happy words without them sounding cheesy or stupid.
Now that I am actually reading it....you're right it IS sad, but not in a bad way I think.
Why is it easier to right sad/depressing words? I find it very difficult to write happy words without them sounding cheesy or stupid.
Well I am very flattered that evoked an emotion.
I think I will turn it into a lyric. Reading over it again, it reminds me of Tool lyrics. It is interesting how I unintentionally reflect the style of my favourite lyricists.
I noticed that you were writing a story, but I haven't had time to read all your older posts about it. I have all sorts of questions, which I will leave till later. But in the meantime: does it fit into a specific genre?
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I think I will turn it into a lyric. Reading over it again, it reminds me of Tool lyrics. It is interesting how I unintentionally reflect the style of my favourite lyricists.
I noticed that you were writing a story, but I haven't had time to read all your older posts about it. I have all sorts of questions, which I will leave till later. But in the meantime: does it fit into a specific genre?
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