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Sunday, October 09, 2005

It's raining again

You seem sad now
or is it just all the reasons why
running through my mind and across my eyes
dissolving you

you shut down all the old escapes
and it feels strange now
with your tears in my eyes
and your emotions racing through my veins

i can't remember the last time I felt this way
waves of distress
intense enough to cut through my life

yet I wouldn't change anything
I like it better without the lies

Comments:
Nice. Yours? Interesting mix of feelings there.
 
Yeah. First cut. It coulld do with some work/editing.
 
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